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  发布于2018-04-07   教育   公开   参与人数:23
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Write an introductory paragraph. Part-time job
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  • caro 2018-04-07 11:18
    wtl940428: Because of the lack of pocket money or some other reasons, part-time job has attracted adolescents’ attention. For sure, taking a part-time job stre
    For the demand for free pocket money or some other reasons,...For sure, taking a part-time job enhance their abilities;...However, in my opinion, taking part-time job should be cautious and select the proper time to do the right things.
  • Vendy 2018-04-07 11:19
    呵呵,补充:As to me, part-time job is helpful to college student.
  • Vendy 2018-04-07 11:21
    改正:college students.
  • caro 2018-04-07 11:21
    张雨绯2: 60112 张雨绯
    Part-time job
       Nowadays part-time job has become a big concern in rencent social life.For this problem different people have different
    Nowadays ... in rencent social life??
    .For this problem 去掉
    .But others consider that part-time job may affect their normal life.  an indispensible part of
  • caro 2018-04-07 11:24
    唐七奇奇: Entering college, large amount of students can't wait to prove their independence. Doing part-time is usually the first choice, which triggering a bu
    Afere entering the  college... which triggers...
  • 关典 2018-04-07 11:54
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      part time job
      in the contemprory socity, part time job is become more and more popular for the college students. students always use their free time to work for money. they usually take the part time job at summer or winter vocation. they sacirified their free time to make their own money. some people appriciate that, they think part time job can improve students ability. but some people don't think so. they considered that doing part time job is just wast our time! do or not is a choise, which one you choose it's up to you.
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